Intelligentsia Purgatory

Here lies an individual desiring to reach a place of total written implosion, where a new individual is created driven to deliver prose worthy of reading....

Friday, August 18, 2006

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Peering into soul mirror,
Looking for answers to unasked questions,
Desperately wishing to remove unwanted obsessions,
Spiritual connections severed chasing so-called
Masculine genuine article,
Leaving broken hearts dangling,
Blowing in emotional winds like participle,
Being asleep its difficult to hear,
Cut through static’s cling like soldier’s ear,
Jesus forgives…

7 Comments:

Blogger Tenacious said...

wow...speechless

thanks for sharing

@Intel...I dont think I even want to know what he is thinking....lol

11:14 AM  
Blogger Sangindiva said...

I too have stood in front of the soul mirror...
I asked question and didn't like what I saw.
He had become god-like in my eyes which
took my focus off of GOD... and my heart?
well it's still broken and dangling-
I am now the PAST participle.

But Jesus forgives, washes away,
makes new, clean and perfect once more-
I and I awake to THAT fact every morning.

This was a beautiful poem.
You are truly talented :)

12:09 PM  
Blogger MagicalSis said...

short and sweet. well written.

i can definitely relate to this description of "darkness" where i turn from the connection to find a connection.

1:55 PM  
Blogger Xave said...

I'll have to read this one again... and again.

9:52 PM  
Blogger Shelle said...

looking into soul mirror...broken hearts dangling...
hadn't stopped by in awhile, glad today i did...very good

12:05 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

beautiful...and so true!

7:19 PM  
Blogger Angel said...

"Peering into soul mirror,
Looking for answers to unasked questions,
Desperately wishing to remove unwanted obsessions,"

my heartbeat quickened just a bit as it crossed my mind and heart who this statement applies to in my life...everytime i think i have surmised enough courage, i am reminded that i have a LONG way to go...

10:39 PM  

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